The root of your writing while appearing reasonable in the beginning, did not sit very well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you actually were able to make me a believer but only for a while. I however have a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one might do well to fill in those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I could definitely be amazed.
The root of your writing while appearing reasonable in the beginning, did not sit very well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you actually were able to make me a believer but only for a while. I however have a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one might do well to fill in those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I could definitely be amazed.